Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Sun Shine

Slowly but surely 
The sun rises up to the sky
And shines for hours
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 22, 2013 at 7:42 AM

    Taya, I love the idea behind this, but I think you're trying to write a Haiku. If you are, your second line has 8 syllables instead of 7.

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  2. The TeacherJune 17, 2013 at 7:12 PM

    I am thinking you were counting "rises" as one syllable?

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